REAL COACHING EXAMPLE — ACCELERATORS
The strongest evidence was hiding.
A founder had secured a paid proof of concept worth tens of thousands of dollars. But investors had to sit through several minutes of technical detail before hearing about it.
The founder was burying the strongest evidence that a customer was willing to pay.
We moved the customer proof to the beginning of the pitch so investors could understand its significance immediately.
Have the founder deliver the revised pitch independently. Ask someone unfamiliar with the company what they understood and remembered.
The founder leads with the strongest evidence they can back up, makes clear why investors should care, and can do it without the coach.